I could be one of those things…
I could been one
of those things…
But the whammy broke
looking to the moon
foolingmyself
A cont inu ation
I could/but/but not/I found
that word turned Pink
after the Whammy bar
broke
I could been one
of those things…
as the old slide
guitar turned
to photon’d
ink
Prompted by:
http://mindlovemisery.wordpress.com/2013/05/19/prompt-4-music/
Inspired by:
Nick Drake – One of these things first
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QSlh8u8Nrig
Fantastic love the form, and that last stanza amazing! I am listening to the song right now =)
Cheers, hope you enjoy it
I did thank you =)
great song choice, great poem!
Thanks it is a good song 🙂
here’s a tenuous tale: my son once went out with the daughter of a woman who went out with Nick Drake. The less tenuous element was she had a load of recordings Nick had made in her bedsit – just him and a guitar. Some are well known songs in really early stages, others just jamming. They were amazing – you can hear trains going by and a kettle boiling in the background. He was a fabulous musician. Such a loss.
nice…as a former guitarist…and still an occassional playya…i like…bend those notes….nice word play in this…
Thanks Brian
All new to me — including, I regret to say, your amazing poetry. But thanks for both.
Thank you for saying so,
Bruce is this you too yay! I have missed you =)
Thanks, the Brain in a jar is where my blogging began on wordpress and I have missed it since Jan when I redeveloped it. all my other blogs just seemed to miss a part of me and I hate having a blog that gets know love 🙂 so poetry and photo a day will now be here.
I am so happy I was scared you’d gone for good and I love your poetry!