Short snip sniper

If for every
drop of cool
rain
a pound coin
fell from my pocket
the price of a news
paper

Would I be any
poorer
for that

or is it better
to employ a
Short snip sniper

to fire
rain over news
and
news of rain

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5 thoughts on “Short snip sniper”

  1. Could be my foggy brain Bruce but I’m entirely beguiled, in a good way. To fire rain over news and news of rain… I think that’s actually a bit beyond poetry, I love it. Love it.

    1. Thanks Trent, it seems that I can stretch like a elastic band, trouble is when I let go there is always that snap back – ouch πŸ˜€ Oh hang on that’s another dream I had πŸ™‚

  2. I would have to agree with Trent. I too am beguiled by this. And your words are pushing back at the morning fuzziness.

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