Where the sea eats the river

            Could I walk untidy
                              unkempt
to the mouth of the river
  where the sea flows
                  and eats

    this ending
Could I look upon
    these eddies
    and tidal starts
       and not wonder

if the sea will
             always eat

              the river

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10 thoughts on “Where the sea eats the river”

    1. Thanks for saying with this one I can’t tell if it is a happy one or if there is a hint of dark menace trickling through it

  1. Fantastic. Thank you. I love places where running water meets the sea, be it a large rivers emptying into an enormous estuary or a tiny stream losing itself in vastness of the ocean. Yum!

  2. This is wonderful. I love it. I am so thankful that you started following my blog because it enabled me to find yours. Thank you, Skye 😀

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