Bloke (e) ness

I meant to say
more than
I love you too
much more
but they went
round my head
to the sky
as  it was raining
as I smoked
outside, getting wet
much more than
I love you too
but they went
round my head
occasionally
the force of them
pushed at my lips
or travelled down
my fingers

But what I meant
to say was so much more
than I love you too

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11 thoughts on “Bloke (e) ness”

      1. Pleasure Bruce…in between, do drop in and check my work and do share your response. Cheers 🙂

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