I never did
think clown was stupid
it takes ever
an amount
of funny to be projected
to an audience
My first attempt at a Shadorma
A syllabic poem. probably from Spain. It has six lines – (a sextet) with a syllable pattern:3/5/3/3/7/5
Ok it wasn’t as bad as I thought it would be, quite relaxing
V1.3
Brain In The Jar 
Hmm might have to give one of these a go later …
Ok so I did make three revision to get the syllable count right but i got there in the end š
Have not heard of a Shadorma before. Interesting.
yeah I have found it very interesting will do another soon
I like it, Bruce! Fun form to work with!
yes it is but I did have to suppress the urge to break the count a few times š
that’s the tough part–Noel has one on his blog where he did not follow it exactly, and it still works š
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I am going to give this form a shot in a day or so Bruce š You did a good job with it by the way š
Bruce,
Le Clown likes.
Le Clown
Thanks, glad you did as you can imagine clowns are cool
That’s not a syllable pattern – it’s Brendan Rodgers new Tika Taka formation š
ha ha I had to Google it ā football formation, I am afraid I know very little about football